Well I'm helping you by voting 5
Cause the stop motion was smooth and probably took a while to make. But what you are doing (which is basically clay guys running around getting killed) has been done...... a lot......... by Knox. So i suggest if you want to continue doing claymation.
1. Don't have you're clay people in the same shape as Knox's clay men
2. Come up with something original and funny
3. Make your voice sound less like a 9 year old
I voted 5 anyway because I think you might have some talent. Kepp it up.